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June 2001: E-memo Writing - Sample Answers

by Deborah Healey

Here are some sample answers to the situations in the June 2001 Tech Tip. Write a regular memo and an e-memo, and look for the differences. Make sure you think about the subject line, the salutation, the closing, and the signature file in the e-memo.

1. You want to remind Ms Maria Rodriguez, your travel agent, about your room reservation next month. You need a double room with bath at the Marquis Hotel. Make sure you give the dates you will be staying and your arrival and departure times.
E-memoRegular memo
Subject: July 20-25 reserv Marquis Hotel

Dear Maria,
Just a reminder about my hotel reservations - I need a double room with bath at the Marquis Hotel in Paris next month, from July 20-25. I'll be arriving at 2pm on July 20th and checking out at 11am on July 25. Could you please confirm the reservation and the room rate for me?
Thanks!
--Deborah

TO: Maria Rodriguez
FROM: Deborah Healey DH
RE: Room reservation
DATE: June 21, 2001

Just a reminder about my hotel reservations - I need a double room with bath at the Marquis Hotel in Paris next month, from July 20-25. I'll be arriving at 2pm on July 20th and checking out at 11am on July 25. Could you please confirm the reservation and the room rate for me?

Thanks!

2. Your company has just reduced the price on its new product by 20%. You want to tell your regular customer, Mr. Charlie Park, about it. Make sure you say what the product is and what the new price will be.
E-memoRegular memo
Subject: Headphone price cut 20%!

Dear Charlie,
I want to let you know about a special on our new stereo headphones. The price is reduced by 20% to just $12 for the next three weeks. I'll be happy to talk with you more about it - just give me a call at 888-555-2222 or email me for a brochure.
Yours,
Deborah
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Deborah Healey, deborah.healey@headphones.deluxe.com
Headphones Deluxe
333 H Street, New York, NY 10001
Tel: 202-555-1111; fax: 202-555-1112
https://www.headphones.deluxe.com

TO: Charlie Park
FROM: Deborah Healey DH
RE: Headphone special
DATE: June 21, 2001
I want to let you know about a special on our new stereo headphones. The price is reduced by 20% to just $12 for the next three weeks. I'll be happy to talk with you more about it - just give me a call at 888-555-2222 or email me at deborah.healey@headphones.deluxe.com for a brochure.

3. You have changed your address, and you want to tell people you do business with about it. You have a mailing list for these people.
E-memoRegular memo
Subject: New address for DHealey & Co

Hello!
We're pleased to announce our new address:
DHealey & Co.
333 D Street
New York, NY 10001
Telephone: 202-555-1111
Fax: 202-555-1112
Email: info@dhealeyandco.com
https://www.dhealeyandco.com
(Our telephone, fax, email, and web address haven't changed.)

We're looking forward to more space for better service to you!
Yours,
Deborah
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Deborah Healey, deborah.healey@dhealeyandco.com
DHealey & Co.
333 D Street, New York, NY 10001
Tel: 202-555-1111; fax: 202-555-1112
https://www.headphones.deluxe.com

(You'll need to address this to each person, one at a time)
TO: Charlie Park
FROM: Deborah Healey DH
RE: Our new address
DATE: June 21, 2001

Dear Charlie,
We're pleased to announce our new address:
DHealey & Co.
333 D Street
New York, NY 10001
Telephone: 202-555-1111
Fax: 202-555-1112
Email: info@dhealeyandco.com
https://www.dhealeyandco.com
(Our telephone, fax, email, and web address haven't changed.)

We're looking forward to more space for better service to you!

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